Kevin Ervin Kelley, AIA
1 min readDec 13, 2020

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‘Make me an editor!” I'm very interested in this new Medium format.

Thank you for your guidance and help. I have read through your advice and cam curious if I'm doing it wrong. I delet the title and subtitle areas and start writing my first bold sentence there. However, it sounds like you're are suggesting to leave the Title and Subtitle areas empty and go to the third line first. Do I have that correct?

I've attached a few of the shortform articles I tried as experiments below. The first few have no pics, but then I added pics in the middle of the text for interest, but it also sounds like you are not recommending pictures in the middle of texts.

I know you must be busy, but thank you for your guidance and help to writers.

https://kevinervinkelley.medium.com/im-impressed-with-how-well-people-are-keeping-up-a-brave-face-during-these-confusing-times-of-582782f13afd?sk=e53647747727b1fbe594e7beb5c2f004

https://kevinervinkelley.medium.com/my-citizen-crime-app-is-supposed-to-make-me-feel-safer-but-its-giving-me-more-anxiety-12fd44c81af9?sk=8f2052aaecfc322c2328b323f856da71

https://kevinervinkelley.medium.com/some-days-i-worry-my-dog-is-going-to-say-im-out-of-here-59e8e4ed737d?sk=9d78b377dbc6ef53725e59fe6ed2489a

https://kevinervinkelley.medium.com/have-you-ever-tried-folding-up-a-baby-stroller-in-front-of-your-wife-366739c9b21c?sk=463fc02815d7f535e5aaf7523fce6112

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Kevin Ervin Kelley, AIA

I’m a retail architect that studies human behavior, perception, and decision-making. I’m fascinated with the intersection of where commerce and community meet.